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What If My Setting is ALL WRONG?

There are plenty of things to poke fun at in Minnesota.

Taken last November after the harvest- this is the cornfield next door to the house I grew up in. I could add more shots of the locale, but they’re all pretty similar… 

Don’t get me wrong, I love the state of my birth- even after years away, it still feels like home. But just as it’s easy to give a beloved family member a hard time for his quirks, it’s easy to laugh at the little absurdities of a familiar place.

Of course, it’s not comfortable for someone ELSE to poke fun at your family…or your home.

Thus, my first instinct is to cringe when the big movie companies attempt to set films in the Midwest.

Maybe you remember the movie that came out a few years back, “New in Town”? It was set in New Ulm, MN.

I spent a considerable amount of time in New Ulm, and no, I never met a cow in the road. Still, the little river town has plenty of quirks.

The movie missed them all.

Sure, they had a lot of jokes about snow, and yes, Minnesota gets a bit chilly. (Ok, fine. It’s cold enough that your snot freezes when you venture outdoors in winter. It toughens you up!)

The problem is, the “it’s cold in the north!” gag could be applied to thousands of locations.

New Ulm is fairly distinctive, as little Minnesota towns go. It has German immigrant roots, and it’s pretty proud of its heritage- hence the big glockenspiel downtown and the statue of Herman the German on the hill.

Herman the German
‘Herman the German’ led German tribes against the Romans in the early A.D.s, and now he sits atop a prime sledding hill in New Ulm, MN

It also completely closes down by 8pm, so college kids, desperate for excitement, used to cruise around the aisles of the 24 hour Hy-Vee grocery store. (Rumor has it they even have a Wal-Mart now. Options!)

In choosing a setting for “New In Town,” the film’s writers chose a place that has some interesting quirks, but having never been there, they only took easy shots.

“Hey! Let’s talk about snow! Oooh, and at least one character’s gotta have that goofy Midwest accent!”

I don’t imagine that these decisions affected the success of the film. Plenty of friends with New Ulm connections saw it and enjoyed it.

I didn’t come out of it outraged, just a bit disappointed- disappointed, and frightened.

You see, while I’ve visited most of the of the lower 48 states, I haven’t had much chance to leave the country.

We made the occasional trip up over the border to Canada.  These weren’t extensive, more along the lines of “Hey! I went shopping in Canada! Culture!!!”

The trip to Aruba for our honeymoon was amazing, and we were excited to get local money and go to local shops and sites rather than the touristy places.

It didn’t go quite like we planned. The poor kid at the store where we bought provisions was completely flummoxed when we didn’t hand him American dollars. He figured out how to make proper change…eventually.

Aside from a very seasick trip to Victoria, British Columbia, that’s it.

Now, here I am, trying to produce a realistic story, set in an era I don’t live in, and on a continent I’ve never visited.

Oh dear…

I’ve tried, oh how I’ve tried, to do it well.

I’ve pored over maps and histories so that my characters are where they’re supposed to be when they’re supposed to be.

I’ve lost count of the number of first-hand sources I’ve read to get the flavor of the times and places.

I’ve spent hours agonizing over cadences of speech and proper word usage.  (I had no idea that ‘tea’ could mean so many different things!)

I’ve found travel books to get an idea for landscapes and of construction materials common to different areas.

I’ve checked locations of railway lines.

I’ve checked native plants and when they’d be blooming.

I’ve checked weather conditions… and so on.

While I keep telling myself that I’ve done the work and it should be fine, I still have this sinking feeling that if anyone who lives in any of the areas I write about reads this book, they’ll KNOW.

They’ll know that I’m writing as an outsider.

Here’s where the fear rears its ugly head: will my attempts be taken as they are meant, as an homage to the courage and suffering of the past, though perhaps an imperfect one?

I hope so.

Maybe next time I just need to come up with an exciting plot set in a corn field.


While I first published a version of this post more than a year ago, as I’ve actually set a publication date for myself, the concerns are back in full force!

Any thoughts, writers? How do you cope with writing in unfamiliar settings? (Or do you just avoid it?!)

Many thanks for visiting!


11 thoughts on “What If My Setting is ALL WRONG?”

  1. I cheat. There’s a reason I almost always write in fictional settings — whether it be modern-day fictional towns or just straight-up fictional worlds. I get to set the rules, then. It IS hard work to create a fictional world — don’t think it’s easy! — but then I’m the one setting the rules.

    I’m impressed you went so far as to check the weather! You did a lot of hard work! Well done!

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    1. Lol- thanks 🙂 Full disclosure, the weather was included in several of the books I used, so it wasn’t an EXTRA step. I considered looking for an almanac or something to get ALL of my days correct. The hubby told me I was crazy. Which may be true…


  2. You know, if I learned anything from DWJ, it’s that you don’t have to go into uber-detail about the setting. You give the details that the character cares about. Everything else just…fills in, in its way. DROWNED AMMET, in particular, showed me how she did that, and DEEP SECRET and DARK LORD OF DERKHOLM, too. When the character is used to the setting, readers fall in sync, as it were, and take in any detail necessary to see. They catch up. 🙂

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    1. I HOPE SO!!! I tried to put in the time and research … and I hope it worked! Using real times/ places that many people are passionate about brings out my perfectionist side- I want so much to do it well! Thanks for the encouraging words, you 🙂 They’re always appreciated, especially as I really can’t think of any good cornfield stories anyway…

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